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Tomblissai watched all of this happened, it was an amazing show of magical strength. She was relieved that this struggle was over. After the light had gone she ran to Lurcanios side, she would tell that he was fading but there was something, something inside of him that was letting him hold on my just a string. A light, the light that he had accidentally taken from Tomblissai all that time ago. Her light that she missed so desperately was within her reach again and for a fleeting moment she considered taking it back from him, but she knew than Lurcanio would die and Tomblissai owed him her life. She let the light stay in him, not knowing if she would every get another chance to retrieve it again. She whispered to him “Hold on just a little longer I’ll be back for you, I promise.” She could feel that the others were in danger and she needed to go to them. Lurcanio was strong and beside that he was arrogant and full of pride and dignity he would not want her to waste her strength sitting here with him because he was hurt even dieing. So she ran off to where she guessed the other would be. She flew threw the halls running as fast as she could, observing the carnage as she went. She rounded the last bend and came face to face with a golem. “Ohh bloody hell” she was already exhausted from the battle she had finished with the queen. She looked to Sari and than to Tenshi. “Time for some ass kicking I think.”

Firous smiled knowing that Tomb was behind her then she and Blaze attacked at the same time. Firous jumped up and attacked the head while Blaze barraled into it's body only for the golem to push Blaze back and throw Firous like a rag doll. She flew past Blaze as he reached out for her and missed. This golem was too strong. Blaze attemted to trip the golem with his tail but instead the golem grabbed it and started to pull him in. Blaze dug his talons into the floors and was slowly boing dragged back. He quickly contacted everyone, If it get's me too close it'll kill me. Use this opportunity to attack while it's hands are full! He seemed to dig his talons deeper and all his muscles started to bulge at the strain. He wouldn't be able to hold on much longer.

Sari jumped into action immediately. With a strong push from her hind legs, she leaped behind the golem, moving with as much agility as possible through the monster's legs, avoiding strong kicks from it that could have been fatal. She jumped onto it's leg, digging her claws into the rock of it's legs. She couldn't get a strong grip but she tried to focus and climb all the way to the eyes. She noticed the golem was concentrating on pulling in Blaze. That was agreat advantage. With newly resored hope, she climbed and climbed and climbed...

Tenshi smiled fleetingly at Tomblissai and called forth the power that she had discovered in Ammon-Ra as she fought with the vampires in this dank place. Summoning up the energy in the sword, she conjured as much water as possible, and with her own power, she attracted the water from the walls full of grime. Throwing as much urgency into the attack, she made the slowly growing bubble of water at the Golem's feet, and it slowly grew, engulfing the body, until it slowly followed Sari's climbing steps, slowing the Golem's movements. Naomi nodded her head, her eyes full of a golden glow, as she transferred energy to her mistress.
We will not be able to last much longer, this new magic is draining you
We must at least help Sari get to the eyes, and if it is slowed, then Blaze may be able to fight back. Tenshi concentrated as the water came to the arms, keeping the cold water away from Blaze as much as possible, and yet keeping hold of the Golem.

Firous slowly picked herself up off the floor and closed her eyes. She let the blue fire envelope her then after a moment it vanished. She opened her eyes and gripped her sword. As she took a step forward she noticed that one of her ribs was broken but she didn't have the energy to heal herself and still fight. She held onto her side with her left hand and walked next to Tenshi. She knew who was controling the water and smiled. She looked to Tenshi, "Do you know what happens to rock if y ou heat it really fast then cool it down?" She smiled widely, "It cracks." She lifted her sword with her right hand and the water around the golem started to boil rapidly. Firous made sure that Shari would not be burned as she supressed the heat close to Shari. She let that happen until she could no longer keep Shari safe then let the heat die quickly. Firous went to a knee and held herself up on the sword. She looked at Blaze and gave a weak smile as he pulled with more gusto. It was a stalemate between Blaze and the golem. All they could do was hope that the golem wouldn't let go of Blaze to get Shari.

Sari saw water below her. It was startling at first, but she came to realise it was Tenshi's magic. She smiled when it started to boil. That was Firous's. Of course, she needed all the help she could get if she wanted to reach those big red eyes. Now, less thinking and more climbing if she didn't want to get burnt. She was was on the golem's shoulder when it realised she was there. Keeping one hand on blaze, it reached for her. With a yelp, she leaped to it's other shoulder. Motivated by the pain in the rest of it's body, the golemstarted shaking, trying to ease off the pain and shake off Sari at the same time.

Tomblissai was about to make a run at the golem but suddenly felt a twinge, she had no idea what it was but it halted her for the most minor of times but it was something serious. Perhaps it was the prince, than again it could have been anything in this strange place. Tomblissai had an Idea thoe and looked up Sari she called “Sari” She withdrew one of her short swords. And tossed it up at her. “Go a step further and slice off it’s head! It doesn’t notice your there yet.”

Sari leaped in the air to grab the hilt of Tomblissai's sword. She knew it was one of the only things, if not the only thing, that could successfully cut off a golem's head. However, she just barely caught it with the tips of her claws. She nearly fell off the beast's shoulder but hung on using her free front leg and her two hind legs. She heaved herself up. Tomb's sword in hand, she turned back to her humanoid form to allow herself more agility. Aiming the tip of the blade at the short but thick peice of rock that served as it's neck, she rushed forward and pushed it into the Golem's neck. Seeing success, she made it go deeper and pulled it out to a side, causing a cut reaching to about the middle of the beast's neck.

Emrys emerges from the shadows. He turns around and notices the ongoing fight. Wanting to help he mutters a small comand, and the gollem the others are fighting slows down, as if it is moving through jello. He mutters to himself "Hope that helps". Starts shooting arrows at the gollem in an attempt to help the others. Becoming frustrated, he shoots a bolt of lightning, causing the gollem to go up in smoke. He looks over at the others, hoping he did something good.

Firous looks over at the new person and looses her concentration for a second. She was sweating heavily from the strain and quickly refocused her attention and mutter to Tenshi, "We have a guest..." Firous gritted her teeth and looked to Blaze, she wasn't sure if she could keep it up much longer.

Emrys trots to the others. "What can i do to help?"

Just as Sari was about to make a final blow on the golem, a lightning bolt apeared out of no where and blew it to a million pieces. Sari flew into the air and landed on the ground with a loud thud. Well, at least the golem was gone... Ignoring the new arrival, Sari turned to Tomblissai. "We must keep going before something else comes and finishes us all off. I'm sure there can be worse than a Golem..."

As the golem exploded Blaze threw himself in the way of the shattering stone to block it from hitting everyone. He looked to Firous then the new guy, Firous looked back to him as well, "How'd you get here anyway?" She was short of breath and she slowly went to Blaze's side to pull stone shards out of his side that had made it between the scales. As she pulled them out she healed them and continued to pull them out as she waited for an answer. "You guys go ahead, I need to finish with Blaze before we can go, but we can catch up easily." Just as she finished she pulled a particularly long shard that made Blaze quiver and a gushing, sucking sound could be heard as she pulled it out to let blood flow. She put her hand over it and the green fire came to her hand once again and the bleeding stopped. "You all should keep going, who knows how long the prince can last."

Emrys looks at the other. "I am sorry for startling you all. I came down here because i was kinda lost, and i just followed your trail down here. I heard the struggle, so i came to help. I am Emrys Brimeth" he said as he extended his hand to the one called Firous "and i hope i can be a valuable asset to your group."

Firous looked up at him and went to shake his hand then stopped and looked at her hand covered in blood. Best not to shake on dragons blood. She wiped the blood on her pants and re-extended her hand, taking his, "I'm Firous. Nice to meet you. Sorry I'm not in much of a mood to talk. Blaze is in pain." She then pulled her attention back to the dragon and pulled another shard and healing it with the healing fire. She takes a step back and looks him over, "Are you alright Blaze?" He looked back at her and nodded. She smiled and began to wipe her hands on her pants to clean them off.

Emrys walked over to where Firous was leaning over Blaze. "Um, if you would like, i could heal him. Not completely mind you, just enough to maybe stop the pain." He offered to Firous, looking at her for approval.

Firous looked at him with a posessiveness in her eyes, "I'm sorry but I don't trust anyone when it comes to Blaze. He'll be fine in a few minutes. No offense." She looked like she really didn't want to offend him, she just was too cautious when it came to Blaze. He is all that she has left.

Emrys nodded, "It is ok, he seems to be very important to you, so no offense taken, i can relate." As he said this he thought about his significant other back home. He shook off the memory "So, to where are we bound?" He directed this question to Firous, since she seemed to be the only one willing to talk to him.

"We are on our way to try and save Tomb's prince," she gestured to the spirit fondly, "this is her mission. We have decided to follow." She smiled as Blaze shook himself and looked to her, "It looks as though it's time to go. Blaze is better." The dragon seemed to smile but it only seemed more terrifying to see the array of teeth that were usually hidden away. Firous got on his back and held her sword by her side. "Shall we move forward now?"

"Yeah, just gimme a sec to... procure a ride" said Emrys. He turned and drew a few runes in a circular fashion on the floor, stood up, then muttered an incantaion. Suddenly the runes began to shine, and out of the center, a great white stag sprang forth. The runes dissapeared and the stag walked over to Emrys, who petted its head. He looked back at the others "This is Cadmon, he is my famliy's guadrian spirit, and my close friend" Cadmon seemed to smile at that. Emrys Got on Cadmon, and looked over to Firous. "Shall we proceed?" he asked, and then moved aside so she and Blaze could lead the way.

Go back to Magical Kingdom

2004-07-15 [Carol Lynn]: You throw those at me and I shall be forsed to take your head off! lol *dives and makes sure i'm on the other side of the pool from the guys* Am I alone here? *looks around* No girls? damn....

2004-07-15 [Gabreil]: mhm....*just gives you a funny look* Your friend has golfballs at the bottom of his pool? Now that's a new one...

2004-07-15 [Carol Lynn]: Yes he dose! He is right beside the golf cource...I mean come on you open the back gate and walk onto the green! lol....ya weirdness but hey. I need friends that can keep up with my odd/crazyness eh? *grabs the super super soaker that Tivadar was talking about*

2004-07-15 [Gabreil]: *splashes you*

2004-07-16 [Carol Lynn]: yes I know that the entry i'm writeing is takeing a while.....be patient eh...or I'll throw you in the pool lol!

2004-07-16 [Firous]: I have a really cool RPG you all should check out...it needs characters, but it has a good plot....it's An Angel's Trial...it's by TheWindrider and it sounds cool...you should check it out...^.^

2004-07-16 [MAHAHAHAH]: I will not be updating till sunday, i hope Henna Teddy's "surprise" is out by then, I'll see ya later!

2004-07-16 [Carol Lynn]: yaaaaaaaa.......sure it'll be......*shifty eyes*

2004-07-16 [MAHAHAHAH]: weirdish, i think your hiding sumthing... *looks around suspicously...*

2004-07-16 [Firous]: ...ok...I wanna know what's going on...how long till the surprise is done anyway?

2004-07-16 [Carol Lynn]: who said it was a surprise? It's just that Tivadar left off in the perfect spot for us to continue furthur....and I didn't know how long it would take me to write the entry....

2004-07-17 [Firous]: oh...ok...^.^

2004-07-17 [Tivadar]: being broken into is not cool, and harming my dog is even more uncool.

2004-07-17 [Carol Lynn]: mehnlai? you actually think we would harm an animale? are you being serious? What are you talking about?

2004-07-17 [Tivadar]: someone broke into my house, and might have kicked her, and spat on her.

2004-07-17 [Carol Lynn]: ouch....

2004-07-17 [Firous]: I'm sorry about what happened....I'd be like you though....my animals are the most important things to me....I'm tired...I just got off work and you all are probably in bed at the moment...it's 6:30 am here....bleh

2004-07-21 [Carol Lynn]: Alright just so everybody knows, all of our characters are in the same place right now as in the courtyard with these shadow things.

2004-07-21 [Carol Lynn]: Now I shall make the point clearer...Firous Megan...everyone. We are at the same presant moment, your all looking around as if nothings there. Tomblissai was just attacked and the creture is standing right there! *hint hint*

2004-07-21 [Carol Lynn]: and remeber these creature are not going to be easy to kill....not going to be easy to hit. They are like Tela's super cretures. So struggle with them hu?

2004-07-23 [Firous]: what do you think of that!? Ha! Pocessed by my own dragon! hehehe...I figured it'd be a good twist. Firous is unconious and her dragon knows it and knows she is in trouble so he takes over her mind completely to protect her and everyone else ^.^ Oh an btw...Blaze made the blue and green flames...all the colors mean different things...Blue is cuts and energy...Green is broken bones...I figured with the hits she took she broke at least a couple ribs and maybe her back...so yeah...lol....I'm just hyper because I like my post ^.^

2004-07-23 [Carol Lynn]: ya......had to kill kaspa there....and these thing don't feel pain either....

2004-07-23 [Firous]: Tomb...would now be a good time for Blaze to show up...he'd come and help us fight....unless there is a bigger thing going on?

2004-07-23 [Tivadar]: I like the write out of Kaspa. lol.

2004-07-23 [Firous]: ok...didn't know...^.^*

2004-07-23 [Firous]: yeah...that was awesome...great way to die...kinda lol

2004-07-23 [Tivadar]: it seemed kinda desperate to me. Like you were just waiting for an opportunity. And then, ooooh, split in half, no struggle. lol.

2004-07-23 [Carol Lynn]: It would be a good time I guess....there will be bigger fights thoe...just to let you know. But it is your decision. Ya the write out of Kaspa...can't just leave him there in the middle of the story! lol

2004-07-23 [Tivadar]: hahahaha

2004-07-23 [Carol Lynn]: ya well......I wasn't in a writeing someone's death mood. You wanna do it? By all means go ahead.

2004-07-23 [Tivadar]: it's done and over with, but I get to write out the next main character death. lol

2004-07-23 [Firous]: I got to go to work now...I'll post when I'm off...at 6:30....bleh....v.v* I'll talk to you later!!

2004-07-23 [Carol Lynn]: Buh bye!

2004-07-23 [Tivadar]: I think i'm going to sign off for bed, i'm exhausted. Long day, very very long day.

2004-07-23 [Carol Lynn]: Ya... I wonder who will leave next....ha ha ha, hopefully no one!

2004-07-23 [Carol Lynn]: K bye Tivy!

2004-07-24 [Carol Lynn]: I have to draw some dort of pic of these creature......my goodness...I don't think any of you are seeing it......

2004-07-25 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: Well then tell us what these creatures look like!

2004-07-26 [Carol Lynn]: *growls* perhapes you should read the story!

2004-07-26 [MAHAHAHAH]: down Henna Teddy down... please??? *big puppy dog eyes*

2004-07-27 [Carol Lynn]: I put...ohhh never mind I give up........

2004-07-28 [Carol Lynn]: if you cut of a body part it bursts into sand...hitting the spinal cord is not easy cus it moves and is there sometimes but not all the time. It's not so easy as cutting off it's head cus the state that this is in changes.

2004-07-28 [Carol Lynn]: and the body it only...ONLY goes into black sand and that's all....come on guys follow my lead here.

2004-07-28 [Carol Lynn]: Has anyone here seen Spirited Away the movie? I am asking all of you so if your on here and you see this question please answer, this is relevant to the story.

2004-07-29 [MAHAHAHAH]: yes, i did, once with you, once with my cousins, once at school, once alone (cause nobody loves me...) and i think thats it...

2004-07-29 [Carol Lynn]: ya well of cource you.....lol

2004-07-29 [Firous]: ...Never heard of it...^.^*

2004-07-29 [Carol Lynn]: ........I think I give up........

2004-07-29 [Firous]: hehehe...gtg now...hope you like the thing I just wrote ^.^ I'll be back tomorrow

2004-07-30 [MAHAHAHAH]: mmmm chocolate! (jersey milk) yummy! ^.^

2004-07-31 [Mitsune]: What's Jersey milk...

2004-07-31 [MAHAHAHAH]: its a chocolate bar... and its gone! wahhhhhhhhhhh! ='(

2004-07-31 [Mitsune]: Buy another one...

2004-07-31 [MAHAHAHAH]: ok! ^_^

2004-08-02 [Carol Lynn]: ya whit! lol *hugs*

2004-08-04 [MAHAHAHAH]: *hugs back* ^.~

2004-08-06 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: Hey Everyone go check out Tomb's Fans United

2004-08-08 [Savior of the Broken]: haven't seen Sari in a while! Well, she's back!

2004-08-12 [Carol Lynn]: yay!

2004-08-15 [Savior of the Broken]: ... And in trouble!

2004-08-19 [Carol Lynn]: *smiles and falls asleep*

2004-08-20 [Carol Lynn]: I'll be gone for a little over a week. I may get on a computer and I may not....so have fun.

2004-08-24 [Carol Lynn]: alright nobody really cares....

2004-08-24 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: Yes, of course they do...they're just busy with their real lives...

2004-08-24 [Carol Lynn]: easy for you to say while your sitting beside me....lol

2004-08-29 [Firous]: I care...but I work too much and didn't really get to come on...

2004-09-03 [Tivadar]: I'm confused, why has everything stopped?!?!?!?!?!

2004-09-03 [MAHAHAHAH]: i dunno....just tired...work dont help much either...

2004-09-03 [MAHAHAHAH]: and Tomb's computer is broken... :'( and i dunno...

2004-09-05 [Tivadar]: Tomb's comp is broken! *gasps at the blasphemy*

2004-09-05 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: Yeah I know......It sucks.....

2004-09-10 [Carol Lynn]: IMMMMM BACK!!! every.....so...often......lol

2004-09-11 [Amerity]: Tomb, im leaving elftown soon so you can kill off moonbird and my npc thingy.

2004-09-11 [Carol Lynn]: what!!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!! *cries*

2004-09-11 [Amerity]: well i was kinda bein bombarded by the hurricanes so it would take me forever to catch up, and i havent been adding lately, but elftown has turned into a rage of theives, I say. its sad. not anyone here thought. everyone here is not a theif, thank god.

2004-09-11 [Carol Lynn]: Rage of theives? Well all the same you will be greatly missed. I wish you could stay, but it's not my choice.

2004-09-11 [Amerity]: yea. im really sorry i have to leave, but its for the better. just make sure if you kill em off its a good one*kill i mean* and no im not phsyco!...lol.jk

2004-09-11 [Carol Lynn]: Ya can do!

2004-09-11 [Amerity]: hehe...thanks so much. means a ton! XD

2004-09-14 [Carol Lynn]: The rest of the story has been moved to Magical Kingdom Through The Dark Forest

2004-09-14 [Carol Lynn]: The story is now 108 pages long! So how is everyone anyway?

2004-09-15 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: Am I being dragges?

2004-09-15 [Carol Lynn]: I don't know...just choose yes or no.

2004-09-15 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: O alright

2004-09-22 [wolf-pack_NL]: hey

2004-09-24 [Gabreil]: hello

2004-09-29 [Carol Lynn]: hello...is anyone even around still? COME ON!!!

2004-10-02 [Firous]: I am...I want to continue...COME ON PEOPLE! Lets do it...lol...^.^

2004-10-02 [Tivadar]: sorry, got back from myt trip today, as soon as I get adjusted to my surroundings again, i'll start writing. Oh, and Tomb, tell your friend not to worry anymore, and to burn or get rid of all that info. lol.

2004-10-04 [Carol Lynn]: yep yep

2004-10-08 [Carol Lynn]: just makeing a note that megan had her internet dis-connected and will be back in about a week or more.

2004-10-11 [Firous]: I won't be on as often...I have no internet and the place I go to use it I can't go to as often...too much gas money

2004-10-11 [Carol Lynn]: alright....

2004-10-14 [wolf-pack_NL]: hey

2004-10-14 [Carol Lynn]: hey to you to

2004-10-14 [wolf-pack_NL]: so how are you and when can i get in to the storry

2004-10-14 [Carol Lynn]: I'm happy as hell....and I dun know mabey after the fight. And the story is written in paragraph format just to let you know. Follow the example of everyone else I guess.

2004-10-14 [wolf-pack_NL]: welim not a big writher so i olways do littel parts

2004-10-14 [Carol Lynn]: mmm well we will see cus i'm picky with this wiki.

2004-10-14 [wolf-pack_NL]: than i gess that im out but ill try to stay in

2004-10-14 [Carol Lynn]: if you wish

2004-10-14 [wolf-pack_NL]: yea i dont realy say much in these storry things just what im doing and what im goin to do that sorta stuff

2004-10-24 [Carol Lynn]: mhm

2004-10-24 [Carol Lynn]: Yay megan is back!!!

2004-10-24 [Carol Lynn]: Gavor?

2004-10-25 [wolf-pack_NL]: so tomb when can i jion the storry

2004-10-25 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: when you read all of it...

2004-10-25 [wolf-pack_NL]: oke wel shats goin to take a while

2004-10-25 [Carol Lynn]: I gave you a summary....join when you think your ready...

2004-10-25 [wolf-pack_NL]: wel i did read that but i whulde have to look fore it in my masseges

2004-11-26 [Carol Lynn]: mhm

2004-11-27 [wolf-pack_NL]: yep

2004-11-28 [wolf-pack_NL]: just tell me when i can get in oke ill inprovise

2004-11-28 [Carol Lynn]: well anytime, now if you want.

2004-11-29 [wolf-pack_NL]: oke lets see

2004-11-29 [wolf-pack_NL]: i hoop thats good what i have put down

2004-11-29 [Carol Lynn]: DrakenGard....please change the format of your writeing so that it is the same as the others. Like paragraph form.

2004-11-29 [wolf-pack_NL]: how do you mean

2004-11-29 [Carol Lynn]: Well writeing in a novle is not like the write you have right?with the stars and all that.

2004-11-30 [wolf-pack_NL]: so can you helpme white this than bechose i dont realy know what you mean

2004-11-30 [Carol Lynn]: for this story format the writeing your doing is all wrong in this situation. Your sentance structure. red eyes: walks in the woods *mmmmmmmm nice place no one that whants to fight me no one to jump me verry nice * The * should't be there and like. here lets see an example. Red Eyes walks in the woods and says "Mmm nice place."... Or getting even more detalied - As red eyes walks through the woods he looks around "Mmm nice place." He says as he walked along the overgrown path. "No one around to fight me...no one around to jump me, very nice." like that none of the starting off as if you were copying and pasteing from the comments 'Red eyes:' like this.

2004-11-30 [wolf-pack_NL]: ooh now i get it i think ill try oke

2004-11-30 [Carol Lynn]: Yeah like that lol ^.^ cool

2004-11-30 [wolf-pack_NL]: oooh oke now i get it thanxx fore sowing me the way

2004-12-03 [Firous]: Sorry I've been gone for soo long! I'm trying to get the internet at home but I haven't got the money yet....I'm trying....Tome if you feel the need you can play my character till I officially return...until then I'll try to get on when I can.

2004-12-03 [Carol Lynn]: ohh ok well it's alright! if I need to I will.

2004-12-06 [Firous]: ok...I just didn't want to leave you in a dead end...and don't worry i will read what happens

2004-12-08 [Tivadar]: *yawn*

2004-12-08 [Carol Lynn]: Alright alright i'll add....

2005-01-03 [MAHAHAHAH]: Hey guys, I will not be updating anymore for a while, sorry guys....i have no computer.... T.T boo hoo!

2005-01-07 [Carol Lynn]: now I shall take control of your character just because...you abandone it...ohh well....lol If anyone dosn't like what i'm doing give me a shout and I shall stop.

2005-01-11 [Carol Lynn]: [wolf-pack_NL] can you watch your spelling just a little bit please? Also dialouge is in " not* and thinging is in Italics

2005-03-15 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: Red Eyes, carefull with spelling and grammar...Its hard to understand.are you tring to say crossbow?

2005-03-15 [wolf-pack_NL]: yea sorry about that but i think you know wat i mean im still lurning ever day so im working on it but i mean a grossbow

2005-03-16 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: ok...good job then....

2005-03-16 [wolf-pack_NL]: thanxx

2005-03-16 [Savior of the Broken]: A tip of mine would be to observe how we spell the words you're not sure about, sometimes we also correct your posts so you can look at the difference of your post after it was corrected.

2005-03-20 [wolf-pack_NL]: i know im lookint at it every time ;surtsing fore worts that i dont know how to spel richt

2005-03-23 [rabidbunny]: hi

2005-03-24 [wolf-pack_NL]: hey

2005-03-24 [Carol Lynn]: Just a note we are undergrown and not in a villiage lol

2005-03-24 [Carol Lynn]: Just a note we are underground and not in a villiage lol So if you don't mind adjusting it, and it's rather a kingdom undergroud I think under thae vail. If you look at The Kingdom and people to sort of get a veiw of what the dark and dreary land looks like. It's called the Vail of storms.

2005-03-24 [rabidbunny]: a ha i know right how to fix now im really srry be done in a jiff

2005-03-24 [rabidbunny]: i hope this is better srry again

2005-03-25 [Carol Lynn]: It's great! ^.^

2005-03-26 [rabidbunny]: aww *blusheS* tank u

2005-03-31 [Tivadar]: *leans on hand* hmmm....we'll see if some new blood can give my imagination a power boost

2005-04-03 [Carol Lynn]: Well I thought I aught to metion to everyone that I am leaveing elftown in a while and I am still going to be writeing Magical kingdom. So if anyone has any ideas or just tell me please I'd love to hear them and if you want to keep in contact I may give me email if anyone would like it.

2005-04-03 [Carol Lynn]: ohh and all togerther the story has been 203 pages long!

2005-04-07 [rabidbunny]: hey yall i wont be writing 4 a while jus so ya know go on battling dem vampires wit out me *sob*

2005-04-08 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: has Shanar been written out?

2005-04-08 [Carol Lynn]: not yet...

2005-05-13 [Shee A'beanne Alainn]: well...ok then...

2005-05-18 [Firous]: uuuuhhhh...yeah...what kind of thingy should we be fighting? I don't know what to put...Any ideas?

2005-05-18 [wolf-pack_NL]: wel it sude be big so let furts make alist of some thing's that are big

2005-07-29 [Firous]: Tomb...do you know what I could have be the guard of the cell?? maybe like a giant serpnet or a golem? HELP!! I want to continue!

2005-07-30 [Carol Lynn]: Hmmm lets see, anything your imagination can come up with really. make up some sort of new creature if you like.

2005-08-12 [Firous]: ok...Golem it is!

2005-08-12 [Carol Lynn]: Golem...that is just too weird. Ohh and that is thinking outloud the creature is fine really just another rpg i just looked at used a golem or something.

2005-08-12 [Firous]: I just ran out of ideas and wanted it to be a challange. An earth golem is about as chalanging as you can get without it being impossible.

2005-08-13 [Carol Lynn]: ha ha great than ^.^

2005-09-23 [Carol Lynn]: hmmm....*whistles*

2005-09-29 [Firous]: sorry...don't have a comp anymore and it's hard for me to get online now...give me a week

2005-12-27 [MAHAHAHAH]: hey, i'm back! i can write again!

2005-12-29 [MAHAHAHAH]: fine...i don't like it when people talk to me anyways...T.T

2006-01-02 [Carol Lynn]: Hello whitley...I'll talk to you *hugs*

2006-01-02 [Carol Lynn]: I think Tivadar stopped watching this page...

2006-01-05 [Firous]: That would suck

2006-01-06 [Savior of the Broken]: yes, he has quite the important character...

2006-01-06 [Carol Lynn]: Ohh yes he is gone...stopped watching it. Ahh well...

2006-01-06 [Savior of the Broken]: maybe you could play his character and then kill him off... eventually... or something...

2006-01-07 [Carol Lynn]: well i'm not to keen with continueing this rp at all...i'm only on elftown like once a week or so. And i'm rather not much of a writer right now, if it comes back than sure i'll continue.

2006-01-07 [Savior of the Broken]: yes well, don't give up hope yet. You never know when someone will come up and make your rp alive again... *is hopeful*

2006-01-11 [MAHAHAHAH]: Carol-Lyn! Don't you dare quit on this wiki I said that in my most stern voice...please don't destroy it!!!!!!!! T.T

2006-01-12 [Firous]: This is a beautiful beginning to something very promising. Though I do understand how you feel...I've let my rp slowly die.... I know what I want to happen but I had an important character 'disappear' I have yet decided on how to fix it. But don't give up. One day you'll sit down at a table with fruit loops and get the urge you've needed.

2006-01-14 [Carol Lynn]: Ha ha okay whit okay....scary girl with no wisdom teeth...I wont destroy it. I'll play Tividars character whenever I'm on...and i'm killing this damn queen already and were getting the prince out and movie onto our next leg of the adventure.

2006-01-15 [Firous]: YAY!!! *jumps up and down with joy*

2006-01-15 [Savior of the Broken]: whipee!

2006-01-15 [MAHAHAHAH]: I win!!!!! :D Love ya Carol! *smiles as big as possible with the swollen face*

2006-02-04 [Carol Lynn]: Yeah you win...now get your ass on elftown! 15 days...

2006-03-03 [Firous]: ...we are in the bottom of a dungeon type place...you may want to change your post to you being a prisoner who broke out or something. oh and HI! ^.^

2006-03-08 [Emrys189]: Firous...is that better? Why has nobody posted in forever?

2006-03-10 [Carol Lynn]: Mmm well I will take out the Umm hi part...that's a bit silly. I can't add right now but i will soon i think.

2006-03-14 [Firous]: Sorry...I was out of town and had no internet...

2006-03-21 [Emrys189]: I hope i did better. Nobody has entered anything in a while

2006-03-21 [Firous]: it's hard to play it when so many people have stopped paying as much attention to it. I'm still trying but I can't be the only one posting.

2006-03-31 [Emrys189]: You are not the only one posting. I am as well. Join High School of Wizardry, but sign up at the High School of Wizardry Student List first. It is my wiki, and nobody has joined yet *sad*

2006-04-03 [Firous]: I'll see what I can do... I know people who would probably like to join that.

2006-04-09 [Emrys189]: Yeah, it is great fun. There is a little explaining i have to do, but i need members first

2006-04-09 [Emrys189]: Join High School of Wizardry please

2006-04-17 [Emrys189]: Has this thing moved?

2006-04-18 [Firous]: no...we can't just push it without someone else joining in.

2006-04-19 [Emrys189]: I'll get DemonFox to join, she is into this stuff. Maybe we should move it, or make it smaller. That way we dont spend 10 minutes scrolling to find out if someone has written something

2006-04-21 [Firous]: we should talk to [Carol Lynn] she's the owner of the wiki

2006-04-25 [Emrys189]: Yeah, i will sed her a message, kay?

2006-04-26 [Firous]: ok...sounds good

2006-05-06 [Emrys189]: messaged her, haven't heard back yet

2006-05-08 [Firous]: ....hhhmmm....

2006-05-08 [Carol Lynn]: well i kinda stopped...just altogether stopped. I'm makeing my own works from the story so far. Well up untill the who vapire underground thing. I'm not really controleing the story like I used to with the plotline i had set out. But i can move this yes. If i still remeber how to make a new wiki. Hmmm....give me a sec here.

2006-05-13 [Emrys189]: Thanks very much, i just hope people start posting again.

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